I am a little disappointed in myself with my first rough draft. I thought that I had a strong thesis statement, but after the remarks on my draft, I now feel otherwise. I also realize that I do not have a good handle on APA. When I took Comp I, I seem to have had a better grasp on writing, than I do now. I will take what remarks have told me are my weak points to my draft and try to improve my writing of the assignment. Good luck to all of you and I hope that you have fared well through you rough draft assignments.